This is probably going to be painful for all of us
Well, I've finally seen Game Ranger Episode 1. I know you guy really like me, so this going to be difficult to say.
You see, you people clearly have animating talent. However, you need to work on your writing and sense of humor. Constant cussing isn't really funny. The ocassional cuss word said at the right time IS funny. When you need to have constant obscenities you're better of using the Censor Beep. The Censor Beep, for reasons no one really knows why, is always funny. In fact the longer it runs, often the funnier it is.
Also, Wyldfire asked me if I'd hook you up with the people who voice for me. I haven't talked to Dan yet (Gaspar), but I'll tell you this right now: Dan will not cuss for anybody. You should know that before you send him a script.
The one part I did enjoy is when the hero said he'd do a lousy job on purpose.
3/5